Comments on: What’s this? A blog post?

By: M.B.

M.B. — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 06:40:37 +0000

“He started shyly, peaking over the pew, shyly smiling when would one would turn around and notice him.”

“As we made are way out of the church, he spotted her again in the vestibule.”

I’m out!

By: Dan

Dan — Thu, 19 Feb 2009 13:12:07 +0000

I can assure you, M.B., that the original post has not been edited. I repeat, sir, are you a drinker?

By: M.B.

M.B. — Thu, 19 Feb 2009 07:53:57 +0000

Well, Mr. Man. It is obvious that you took heed of my comment and fixed at least one of your faux pas. Besides that, I just think this was not one of the meticulous and coherent writings that we have come to expect from BFS. Has that ridiculous Facebook distracted you that much?

By: Brian

Brian — Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:45:28 +0000

The part about your son and the high school girls at church is priceless. Too bad you didn’t have a video camera handy for the breakdancing and karate chopping.

By: Dan

Dan — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 17:10:24 +0000

MB,

I’m not claiming it’s my best work, but still. Where exactly did you become confused and might you have been drinking?

Rick,

It was my four-year-old son. He must watch the same shows your son does because he didn’t learn those moves from me.

Thanks for commenting,
Dan

By: RickMonday

RickMonday — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 15:47:39 +0000

How old is your son? I loved the Karate Moves and Break Dance reference. My 5 year old does those moves all the time. I have no idea where he learned them. Good stuff.

By: M.B.

M.B. — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 14:59:48 +0000

Thanks for the effort but I must ask you; were you really tired when you wrote this?

A writer without an editor is just asking for trouble. How can I recommend you and a large raise to the SJ-R after this?

Loved the last line though.

By: SBBS Fan Club

SBBS Fan Club — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 14:13:34 +0000

Glad to hear you had a great time with Sarah and the band …

All the best,
SBBS Fan Club

http://www.myspace.com/sarahborgesfanclub